napowrimo day 19

i made this poem by looking up the scientific definition for radiant and then rewriting it eight times [with only minor edits each time]. it has no title. it will not get one. it does not need one |V .


tracing flamestone footsteps
left when they hurled
lovingly
into gaia’s deadly embrace,
you travel upwards through
a million invisible constellations
brimming with a million more words
to one radiant origin—
nestled among stars.

3 comments:

little wing writer said...

on day 19 thaz a perfect place to be... come closer

Anonymous said...

This is lovely. I especially like "a million invisible constellations
brimming with a million more words..."

Anonymous said...

Gorgeous!