making death do tricks is a great way to look at the circus!
Clever work - enjoyed this!
I like the angle you used to approach this!
loved the subtle perspective of daily death as a nonchalent sorta job... red lips
I like how risk-laden, dangerous jobs are all given part of the stage.Welcome to the big Tent!
I really like your play on words towards the end. very enjoyable poem!
loved the second one :)
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making death do tricks is a great way to look at the circus!
Clever work - enjoyed this!
I like the angle you used to approach this!
loved the subtle perspective of daily death as a nonchalent sorta job... red lips
I like how risk-laden, dangerous jobs are all given part of the stage.
Welcome to the big Tent!
I really like your play on words towards the end. very enjoyable poem!
loved the second one :)
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